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It really looks realistic, especially the iris and the eyebrow. Light and shadow on the iris create volume, and the strokes make an impression of a true eye
There are just some things that make the drawing seem like separate parts, not a whole thing: first, to make an eye look natural there should be shadow below the upper eyelid, here it seems to be absent or too faint, instead there is some white space between the upper eyelid and the iris. Second thing - the corner of the eye lacks accent and depth (maybe it seems so only at the photo), and the shape is a bit unnatural, usually it is a bit more roundish and turned a bit downwards. And finally, the wrincle above the eye. The eye somehow wants to be replaced closer to it, as the space between them usually is very small (unless the eye is half-closed, but here the eye is wide-open).
I'm not at all a professional and I don't want to seem criticizing, I just saw here and remembered what one artist once taught me
But in general it looks very attractive and very realistic
You used your skills and this is really captivating.
I would like to watch this in a zoom in photography, because than I can give you more response.
At any rate it´s really detailed, the eyebrow is really realistic.
I think the hint of the nose gives the drawing an really important visual syntax point which gives the drawing an increase.
Next Point, the eye:
The iris is really detailed and captivating, good job!
It shows the soul and the emotions really perfect!
I would like to see this in a closer perspective!
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